what happened before this scène?
First, when we look at this picture, we think it's probably a crime scene. naw, i'm going to imagine what happened before this scene.
it looks as if the woman and the man were both detectives. I suppose that their mission was to enter mr smith house's and they had to shoot Mr smith. While the woman was upstairs to inspecting rooms, Mr smith shot the detective and ran away. The woman heard a shot and went downstairs quickly. Then she was terrorised when she noticed her friend’s death because she thought that he must be dead.
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my questions
1: why did they want to kill mr smith?
2: what were they looking for?
3: how did they get in?
hope this helps make your story better
jesse <3
alright there are a few mistakes, but otherwise your story is great! here are the corrections:
what happened before this scene?
First, when we look at this picture, we think it's probably a crime scene. now i'm going to imagine what happened before the scene.
it looks as if the woman and the man were both detectives. I suppose that their mission was to enter Mr Smith's house and to shoot him. While the woman was upstairs inspecting rooms, Mr Smith shot the detective and ran away. The woman heard a shot and quickly went downstairs. Then she was terrorised when she noticed her friend’s death.
<3 jesse
awnser at your questions:
1:they want to kill mr smith because he have killed a person!
2:they looked for weapons
3:they forced the door
kiss
martin
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